Time

Darla Cooke on Oct 6, 2009

Tags: alone, Passes Slowly, Stands Still, time, waiting, wondering

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A poem about time.

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Time seems to stand still,

it hardly passes at all.

It moves so very slowly,

when you’re always alone.

I sit at home waiting,

wondering about my life.

When will things get better?

Where do I go from here?

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Ramalingam on Oct 6, 2009
Is it the time or the watch that stands still?
Vikram Chhabra on Oct 6, 2009
Time is indeed a mystery… Thanks for this poem!
Emma Green on Oct 6, 2009
I often sit and think this way. Good one to share
ken bultman on Oct 6, 2009
Good grief. I got a “forbidden” for tick tock.
Sourav on Oct 6, 2009
Nice… loneliness can do this type of trick. And you look at the clock three times a minute and you feel… time standstill!
emmahaynes on Oct 6, 2009
Oh gosh, there is always something to do, even craft classes can help take away the edge of loneliness-you never know what might follow
friendshipter on Oct 6, 2009
Its time to fulfill ur destiny.. ur dreams..

what do you think of my articles and my art..
thanx..
Petalm on Oct 6, 2009
Yes it hardly mooved but then all of a sudden it’s gone.
diamondpoet on Oct 7, 2009
To me there never seem like there is enough time to do all the things I would like to do. Nice!
STEVE666 on Oct 7, 2009
It sounds like you’re bored, Darla.
xoxo on Oct 7, 2009
Time always has its best. A very nice read. Thank you.
Juliet Christie Murray on Oct 9, 2009
Nice . I wish I could see time like you. time is moving so fast for me .I wish it coluld slow down some how.
CutestPrincess on Nov 4, 2009
love this… my time is precious…

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