Here is a reflection of a man who taught me the how to be a simple man.

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                                                              Time

  He had bushy eyebrows and a sunburned nose,

walked around most of the time in denim clothes

had a handshake that could bring you to your knees.

His long hair had turned to gray,

folks say it was jet black in his younger days.

His eyes had seen miles of cotton fields,

cried in the bloody killing fields,

Vietnam changed him from a boy to a man.

He had seen the insides of most bars,

rather ride on his scoot then in a car,

Man how I respected that man!

He taught me how to make things run,

taught me how to make time for fun,

give more then I ever take.

Said don’t be afraid to stand your ground,

never quit even when you get knocked down,

there is still a chance to win, even on your knees.

There are times when things get just a little much,

when I’m about to hang it up,

that his old gruff voice comes to my ears.

You call your self Ironbutt,

what are you doing giving up?

get of your duff and put it all in gear.

This life only comes at you once,

passes folks by that quit and give up.

This ain’t what we talked about.

You walked with me on a journey once,

I passed it on to you when my time was up,

don’t you dare give up the dream.

Everyone out there has some good them

there is so much you can do when you got friends

so quit your sniffling and get on your feet.

He had bushy eyebrows and a sunburned nose,

walked the road he had chose.

I was proud to be called a Brother by him.

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  • Butterfly Musings on Dec 27, 2009

    amazingly written, an excellent job as always:}

  • Faith Hodge on Dec 27, 2009

    I really, really enjoyed reading this. So very humbling. What a friend to have and to keep in your heart forever. Thanks for sharing such good writing.

  • Paul Roberts on Dec 27, 2009

    Thank you. It was this time of year 12 years ago that I lost him, yet the dream lives on.

  • jaysonv on Dec 27, 2009

    great post.. i like it very interesting.. thanks for sharing the info Friend.

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 27, 2009

    your bro was a great guy.

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 28, 2009

    He really does sound like a man to look up to. This is a wonderful tribute to him..

    Christine

  • thuanynguyen on Dec 28, 2009

    Another great poem!

  • Mila Marcos on Dec 29, 2009

    If at first you do succeed, hip hip hooray! If it takes you a few tries to get it right, who’s counting? Nothing like having a friend who encourages your dreams, but still loves you even if they come to nothing. Beautiful poem and dedication to a dear old friend Paul:)

  • lillyrose on Dec 30, 2009

    Brilliant poem once again! I really liked this.

  • L.Dalton on Dec 31, 2009

    You have truly done your mentor justice. I felt the emotions you were expounding on, when you walked with him.

  • Colleen Ranney on Jan 1, 2010

    Great expressions of an amazing legacy!

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