Time

Bernadette Louise on Nov 14, 2008

Tags: punish, Rain, time

How time has its way with us.

Time why do you punish us
Like a pouring rain into the stream, you wash away our dreams
Time why do you punish us
Like a wind that steals its leaves from its tree
Tomorrow is just another day of our time for you to run free

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Debra. on Nov 14, 2008
Short and cute!
R J Grant on Nov 14, 2008
That was really very good Bernadette.

Grant
Will Gray on Nov 14, 2008
Short but very thoughtful and well written!
Michele Cameron Drew on Nov 14, 2008
Very nice write.
lindalulu on Nov 14, 2008
ah, time…very nice.
gabbic1219 on Nov 14, 2008
that was really great,i love the message
time….it gets it way!gabbi
Enzo Silvestri on Nov 14, 2008
Great poem about time, I also did one on time, seems to touch us all eh…
Peter Cimino on Nov 14, 2008
Short but very true. Well done
poetic enigma on Nov 14, 2008
Short and Sweet,
this is a great poem

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