I tried to change my style of writing poems a little and I hope you will like this one.

As I woke up I noticed everything around me was black

Everything was dark

There was not even a spark

I tried to move and tried to walk but I couldn’t do a thing

Around me there was nothing

But in the distance I could see some thing

The something I could see was a big warm light coming towards me

As I was wondering what it could be

All of a sudden I was free

I could move again so I went to the beautiful blue light

And it told me I shouldn’t fight

And it won’t stop my flight

It told me stories about things like geography and history

And said that I didn’t need to worry

Or I was going to be sorry

Mysteries of the world unfolded before my eyes but it was dark

And I only remembered a part

Of the stories lost in black

When I opened my eyes again I was in my room thinking

I felt my memories shrinking

Fading and sinking

Was it all real or was it just a silly dream in my head

I’ll never know if what was said

Was real or should’ve remain dead

I wrote this poem in a hurry

So I won’t forget the story

The only thing I can remember

Is that it happened in December

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  • exec92 on Mar 24, 2011

    Nice one

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