At the end times, the Jews are given custody of the earth, which the Gentiles have hoarded for so long.


Time of the Gentiles is almost at end,
And from them this broken world God will rend,

Giving it to nation of Is-ra-el,
The Jewish people their role will fulfill,

A rich land flowing with honey and milk,
Will finally take charge and dress in silk,

God’s bless’d people will no longer be down,
But will wear the world’s lone controlling crown,

And within the span of a few more years,
Jesus will appear and wipe away tears,

Bringing heaven here to be paradise,
With him present to be seen with our eyes.

PTR August 19-21, 2012

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  • lauralu on Aug 22, 2012

    Beautiful photo very inspiring poem

  • Andie Papke on Aug 26, 2012

    That’s a beautiful poem. I’ve been to the middle east. Thanx 4 your share.

  • Barbara Cox on Aug 29, 2012

    Sorry It Took So Long To Get Here ,I Love This Poem And It Has A Really “AWESOME” Message ,I Do Pray Everyone Will Read,Love the Picture ! Love You !

  • d2lobe on Sep 6, 2012

    You chose a ten syllable count. The meter was a bit choppy for me at first, but it became smoother after the second read. It remained consistent throughout.

    You used rhyme and slant rhyme to create a lovely narrative poem. This could be tightened up by losing some unneeded words. I would suggest cutting it to an eight count for a smoother read. Well, doneā€¦D

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