Sometimes we get trapped between what we want and what we think we should want…

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Tiptoe, tiptoe,
Over egg-shelled floor.
Whisper, whisper,
When you want to scream.
Sweep it, sweep it,
Under braided rug.
Sleeping, sleeping,
To stay in your dream……

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  • Prometheus Ridley Scott on Jun 14, 2011

    Very good :)

  • yes me on Jun 14, 2011

    Like this one Linda, how I miss the egg shells he he he ouch! cheers

  • JJ Patton on Jun 14, 2011

    I’ve definitely felt this way 99% of my life. LoL

  • Lord Banks on Jun 15, 2011

    Excellent I liked it! LB

  • CHIPMUNK on Jun 15, 2011

    great

  • T. S. Lewis on Jun 15, 2011

    I like the style of this one.

  • obikelvin on Jun 21, 2011

    Excellent write!

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 21, 2011

    Nicely said,

  • Zappy on Jun 22, 2011

    Welcome back Linda. Poem is key under excellant write.

  • srbasu on Jun 24, 2011

    Very nice Information Thanks for sharing.

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