In order to count your blessings,
you must see your blessings….
In order to see your blessings,
you must ask for what you want….

Lost in thought

 by dedicated concentration

hypnotized

by your heart

dispersing poetic beats of harmony

sincere songs in conversation

released by the breath of air your soul releases

as your hands clamp together 

and feel your essence in  prayer

 

 

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  • Katie Marie on Nov 2, 2009

    Profound simplicity. You have captured that essence of prayer here. Well done.

  • Diverseblogger on Nov 3, 2009

    This poem is amazing! Keep up the great work

  • papaleng on Nov 3, 2009

    Amen, a genuine prayer seen through a simple poem.

  • Asmideep on Nov 3, 2009

    Hey Thanks for sharing it…. Good post…

  • ashan1614 on Nov 3, 2009

    Yes, but often what we want isn’t what is best for us. God knows the difference. It’s usually only in hindsight that we recognize that what He gave us was a blessing. Good write!

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 3, 2009

    Nice poem.

  • alc on Nov 3, 2009

    This is a great read! Check your inbox!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 8, 2009

    GR8888888888888

  • qasimdharamsy on Dec 13, 2009

    Great Poem !!!

  • Citra Florenca on Apr 14, 2010

    Love the poem! Count your blessings, instead of your sorrows :)

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