To Be Loved More

PHILLY DREAMER on Jan 27, 2012

Have you ever loved someone that couldn’t love you back. Only to see that person falling in love with someone who isn’t you.

There

There she is

The she is over there.

Breaking my heart without a single care.

Ripping it out with the way she looks at him like she’s in love.

She never looked at me that way before.

Was I not good enough.

To be loved

More.

This poem was written in response to Daniel Crompton’s Triangular Sequence Poetry Challenge.

To participate in this challenge, click the link below.

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Comments (15)

Daniel Crompton on Jan 27, 2012
Ouch! Nice work.
Dragoonk on Jan 27, 2012
Another good one.
MJRapp on Jan 27, 2012
Very creative, as always.
Eunike on Jan 27, 2012
Very good one
papaleng on Jan 28, 2012
Another good piece,
BANASCO on Jan 28, 2012
nice work. this is wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Angelji on Jan 28, 2012
seems theses are my words… beautiful.
Vinaya says good bye on Jan 28, 2012
Wonderful
Dora77 on Jan 28, 2012
Interesting,
Kristie Claar on Jan 28, 2012
Good work Philly! I like it! Not sure I would be able to compete in this one. Might be above my talent.
CutezSoNia on Jan 28, 2012
Wonderful…Thanks for sharing.
Val Mills on Jan 29, 2012
I’m enjoying getting to know your work. And heavens, here’s another challenge I didn’t know about!
iva75cpb on Jan 29, 2012
Good result.
Aroosa Gloomy on Jan 29, 2012
wonderful
Robin Harkey Dixon on Jan 30, 2012
Your poem gets straight to the heart of the issue. Unfortunately, I’ll have to write one from her point of view (being that I’m on the other end of this – knowing that there is someone who loves me in a way I can’t reciprocate).

Hi there!