To Burn

Jasin on Jul 18, 2009

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Poem about Burning.

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To Burn,
How the pain must be.
To Burn,
A ruined dream.
To Burn,
Forgotten in the flames.

After awhile the pain just melts away..

To Burn,
Is it a cleansing?
To Burn,
Is it a punishment?
To Burn,
Is it what you want father?

Then let me suffer for those that do not deserve such a fate…
~For those who have forgotten your light, the brightest flame of them all~

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delfinfigueroa on Jul 18, 2009
I like the way you write.
delfinfigueroa on Jul 18, 2009
I like the way you write.
Darla Cooke on Jul 18, 2009
Very nice poem.
Westbrook on Jul 18, 2009
Very good Jason. Very thought provoking.
Jenny Heart on Jul 18, 2009
Great depth in your words.
HelloSiti on Jul 18, 2009
Those tags are more than the poetry itself.
Cynthia Bartlett on Jul 18, 2009
interesting. good job.
Jasin on Jul 18, 2009
lol Siti.
Sheila M on Jul 18, 2009
Love the images and wonderful words
TommyP on Jul 18, 2009
Awesome piece Jasin!! Especially love last lines !The photo is very cool too! Check out my newest if you get a sec. Tom
George W Whitehead on Jul 18, 2009
Nice one, Jasin.
hfj on Jul 18, 2009
Beautiful words and poem Jasin. Nice to see you back. Well done.
Karen Gross on Jul 18, 2009
Very deep and emotional. I am sure that there are layers of meaning here.
WriteEditSeek on Jul 18, 2009
Beautiful, dramatic, spiritual poem. I love the image as well.
The Cinders on Jul 18, 2009
That’s amazing
It kind of makes you question things
I like it
_Bria
Melinda McQueen on Jul 18, 2009
Very thought provoking indeed.
spiritwalker on Jul 20, 2009
wow that is powerful jasin…such simplicity but so deep. I love it!
Poetic Enigma on Jul 21, 2009
It’s nice to see you back, I really like this piece,
Very powerful message!
ken bultman on Jul 22, 2009
Message offering self sacrifice. Well written.
alc on Jul 31, 2009
Very well written!
Aldrin A Wilding West on Sep 7, 2009
Do not sacrifice yourself for others. You do that, and we lose a great poet…..not fair.
fragile18 on Sep 9, 2009
great.

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