A funny, yet strange night at the forum.

It started out like any night the threads got busy fast.
Abdella pushed his poems like he had done in days  past.
When questioned all he could retort, was Babel with , his rage,
he attacked poor fegger like a wild animal in a cage.
 Morgana tried to cool his heels, just like a mother could .
While Casey Kelly spanked his butt, just like I thought she would.
And  newbies tried to tell this kid ,how silly that he sounds.
I browse the other threads ,” YOU KNOW “just making my rounds .
When I came around, to the thread, abdella called his own.
On came drew, who had been watching from his lofty thrown.
He cast his mighty sword out “,hey slimey where are you” 
I would expect, nothing else, from self proclaimed King Drew .
 as you may suspect abdella just  had to respond back,
with stupid Babel ,Casey had to give him one more whack
So abdella went back under the bridge ,looking for friends to meet
then princess Megan, waved her wand, over king drew ,( IT WAS KIND OF SWEET )
That’s when this night got strange ,me  thinks a spell was cast.
Drew was kind ,and it was scary ,there’s no,way this could last .
then just as it had started,  now it ends , least for tonight .
If this story find a following ,part two I’ll have to write..

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  • Morgana on Feb 24, 2009

    LOl I loved it…but you already know :)

  • Annie Hintsala on Feb 24, 2009

    I’m so glad you decided to publish this! Very funny.

  • Casey Kelley on Feb 24, 2009

    Haha thank you for this =).

  • rutherfranc on Feb 24, 2009

    write part two.. that`ll get them going at it again..

  • F J McCarthy on Feb 24, 2009

    very funny stuff David

  • Maggie Hoffie on Feb 24, 2009

    By far my favorite poem on this site! Well done! I love that I’m a princess….and that is by far the best forum I’ve ever been to. Write part two…even though I’m prolly not in it, It will be hilarious. Fantastic. Absolutely wonderful.

  • Serenity Jones on Feb 24, 2009

    To Drew! To Drew!

  • Likha on Feb 24, 2009

    I knew this was coming for the stars of the show. Neverty should have been there too.

  • David Cartier on Feb 24, 2009

    Thank you all for your nice comments; I WONDER IF THE KING HAS LEFT THE BUILDING THOUGH .LOL

  • miss cornelia on Feb 24, 2009

    It was amusing, when was this kindness on Drews part though? I must have missed it.

  • Paul Roberts on Feb 25, 2009

    This has to be a tribute to the triond forum,posted for all to read. Enjoyed. Friend and fan,smile

  • Majic on Feb 26, 2009

    I would have loved this more if it had my name in it! I joined the public beating you know! Hehehehe

  • David Cartier on Feb 26, 2009

    im sorrymajic i will make sure your in the next one im just waiting for drew to emerge he always makes it funnier

  • spiritwalker on Mar 3, 2009

    I love it!!!! Good one David!

  • Tusaani on Mar 4, 2009

    lmao! I loved it, thanks for the laugh.

  • The Reporter on Apr 21, 2009

    Erase my name from this article. It’s full of lies.

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