To Earn The Enduring Love

drelayaraja on Nov 11, 2009

A love poem. How we behave when the love bug bites us.

TO EARN THE ENDURING LOVE

She gave me a pair of wings

That encouraged me to FLY,

Then why she took it back?

Did I fly too HIGH?

I left my soul above,

Then had the FALL,

Again I asked her the wings,

In her court was the BALL.

The words meandering in our mind,

Are inside the MOUTH-TAP,

Why couldn’t we open it?

Was there a communication GAP?

Dr.P.Elayaraja

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Comments (10)

Jane Benitez on Nov 11, 2009
Such tender words of a man in love – very well done. Love the heart.
cutedrishti8 on Nov 12, 2009
great piece of work..
Teves on Nov 12, 2009
Very interesting….
diamondpoet on Nov 12, 2009
Good flow and very creative.
Pаtsy Collins on Nov 14, 2009
Ah, love! I don’t think we’re supposed to understand.
Ghassane JAMMAL on Nov 14, 2009
so emotional and romantic, love is a very beautiful feeling!
Leonardo da Vinci E. on Nov 17, 2009
\”Don\’t let them get the best of your heart, save the rest of your love, and you’ll be taken care of..\”(A song by Chaka Khan).
Alexiandria M Michaels on Nov 17, 2009
interesting
aunslaught on Nov 21, 2009
Nice one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! good pic too =D
Raj the Tora on Jun 30, 2010
nice read. Apt picture and wordings. Every single word is worth it as I know that it has come out of personal experience.

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