Make your way there, for the pure experience.

Forcing your soul to soar,

Taking off for places unknown.

Basking in an uplifting retreat.

Far from the mundane and morose.

Being nourished fully by goodness,

Serenity and so much love.

From a strong source of energy,

That is so very much, outside

The normal element and range.

So very needful in every way,

Is this magnificent, soaring of the soul.

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  • foxpete88 on May 19, 2011

    Nicely, I like it…thanks.-

  • Aiyanna on May 19, 2011

    They say the crow is the carrier of the soul back to creation based on mythology and belief…. I do get that feel in what you have written as is co-related to death and the crow would be taken as the wings that fly it back to creation in the afterlife…

  • Guy Hogan on May 19, 2011

    It sounds like pure, wonderful serenity.

  • Freethinking on May 19, 2011

    The power of positive thinking is a wonderful thing. I try to keep myself immersed in good vibrations and I smile, laugh and joke too many times a day to count.

  • beingwell on Aug 14, 2011

    Very nice.

  • beingwell on Aug 14, 2011

    I’m back once more. Thanks for this link. :)

  • carissimi on Sep 8, 2011

    so loved reading this today!

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