A Journey to England would be a Delight.

 

He brought me a star from the shop.

In the sky a Donna star is mine to keep.

I am a very for ever glowing night light.

I want to go to England.

I just don’t have the means.

I could fly on the wings above.

I could rattle along on the steal rails of land.

I could travel by bus.

Even want to ride my bike it just wont float.

I want to meet my English gentlemen.

Oh dear moon and stars way above you know of my dilemma.

I would swim the oceans far and wide.

I would crawl on broken glass.

Just to see you once right before my eyes.

He is the light of my day.

He is in my dreams while sleeping.

He is around me yet so far out of reach.

My bags are packed.

ready for that trip.

To meet my English Gentlemen.

A journey to England would be a delight.

One day would be complete.

       ♥♥♥ I love you ♥♥♥ 

 

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  • pattiann on Mar 14, 2010

    There are a lot of places I’d like to go. England is one of them. My husband won’t travel because he saw everything in the Army.

  • johnnydod on Mar 14, 2010

    Well I hope you get to meet him Donna whoever he is (Wink) At least we don’t have poisonous snakes and spiders over here, its never TOO hot or TOO cold just right.
    No Earthquakes or Monsoons
    No Volcanoes or Typhoons
    Just too many people on such a small island.. but I know YOU would be welcome.
    So I hope you meet your Englishman Donna

  • Stan Wilson on Mar 14, 2010

    yeah hope you meet your Englishman Donna.

  • wonder on Mar 14, 2010

    A yearning portrayed so well.

  • ken bultman on Mar 14, 2010

    If my wishes made it so you would already be there with him but isn’t it wonderful to have someone…even if they are far away from the arms I know you would wrap around him.

  • bellatwix on Mar 14, 2010

    England is such a romantic place. I feel like I’ve been there from reading romance novels :)

  • standingproud on Mar 14, 2010

    I would Ken
    I would
    I would
    and never let go

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 14, 2010

    I do hope your wish comes true one day. This is a wonderful country to visit and I think you could probably mean your english gentleman here. An enjoyable read.

    Christine

  • Starpisces on Mar 14, 2010

    Cute poem… yes, I hope your wish will come true. You will meet your English Gentlemen on your trip to England, or he can meet you in Australia instead…

  • Lord Banks on Mar 14, 2010

    Well you have an English Lord as a friend on Triond! you’ll get there one day if it means enough to you, nice poem. LB

  • krrymarie on Mar 14, 2010

    Awww full of emotion, I hope you get your wish, and you meet your Englishman and soon but in the mean enjoy what you have got xx

  • Hepsi.M on Mar 14, 2010

    good luck in meeting the Englishman..well expressed poem

  • Moira62 on Mar 14, 2010

    where ther\\\’s a will there\\\’s a way Donna…and when you do get there pop over here to me :)

  • Moira62 on Mar 14, 2010

    ok…now triond is acting up again…….
    where ther’s a will…there’s a way :)

  • standingproud on Mar 14, 2010

    I will/that is a deal xxx

  • Shirley Shuler on Mar 14, 2010

    If I had my way, Donna, you would already be with your English Gentleman,

  • giftarist on Mar 14, 2010

    I hope you’ll meet your Englishman. ^_^

  • yes me on Mar 14, 2010

    Some real nice places, and people in England.
    Hope your dream comes true.

  • Silent Wasp on Mar 14, 2010

    Nice article though a Serb gentleman, like myself, would be a far better option lol just sayin….lol Great read.

  • Tina Cassello on Mar 14, 2010

    This was nicely expressed and I hope you find a way to meat too. So, this was a Triond fan of yours? I don’t understand that.

  • Goodselfme on Mar 14, 2010

    Nicely penned piece of wishing.

  • Lady Sunshine on Mar 15, 2010

    Oh Donna, I hope your wish comes true. Lovely write.

  • diamondpoet on Mar 15, 2010

    Don\\\’t let go of your wishes and your dream, we all need something to keep us happy.

  • Atanacio on Mar 15, 2010

    a very wonderful write

  • LovelyWolf on Mar 15, 2010

    I’d love to go to Lourdes one day, my dreams as well as yours shall be realized!

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Mar 15, 2010

    Been in the same situation as you are now, meeting came true for B and I and it will for you if you keep to your dreams. To dreams coming true!

  • standingproud on Mar 15, 2010

    ♥:)♥

  • lillyrose on Mar 16, 2010

    I love England and would never want to live any where else. I have found my English gentleman, he writes me songs and poetry…. so what if he is rubbish at DIY! loved your poem.

  • lillyrose on Mar 16, 2010

    I love England and would never want to live any where else. I have found my English gentleman, he writes me songs and poetry…. so what if he is rubbish at DIY! loved your poem

  • Stacey Watts on Mar 17, 2010

    I hope you get there soon. This was a very beautiful poem. Wonderful work.

  • CA Johnson on Mar 19, 2010

    I really loved your poem. I hope you get the chance to get there too.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 20, 2010

    there is a guy here

    who makes E love possible

    perhaps E babies too some day

    go ask him and on his computer play

    he could possibly help u the E WAY

    or help u forget England

    his only expert way

  • Frances Lawrence on Mar 21, 2010

    I hope England and your English gentleman live up to your dreams when you finally get here.

  • zoeyclark on Mar 21, 2010

    I love London and I always had a thing for British guys. Not the pompous one of course but I once met this really cute, hot and fun English guy and it was one of the best dates I ever had.
    I should go to England as soon as I can afford it;)

  • chefpete41 on Apr 24, 2010

    An English gentleman will now leave a comment. Marvelous poem my dear !

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