"Music revives the recollections it would appease."–Germaine De Stael

What is a BFF? Do you have one? This is a lyric poem designed for my best friend forever (bff), Melodia Quinte Dominguez, a physician’s wife, a long lost friend in high school rediscovered after fifty years. Read me and you will open the heart of a friend.

The  first letters of every line spell out her name, MELODIA QUINTE DOMINGUEZ. Every letter in the name is written in my blood, for that’s how I love her.

Music is your name, best friend forever Melodia,

Enchanting,  magical as the moon upon the sea;

Love makes me touch the  caroling moonbeams,

Over the   rhythmic   moanings of the sea;

Did I hear God’s music, Melodia?

Innocence  reveals the music of  your charm  

Among  God’s  scattered splendors  you disarm.

 

Quietly steal into my slumber,  Melodia,

Unleash  the  ghosts of  unsung songs

In my withered heart entombed.

None but a beautiful soul like you

Touched by the music  of the moonbeams

Enthralls my heart to sing again.

 

Do you know how much I love you?

O, make my lovenotes  weave a fairy’s wand

Melting the winged years of our youth 

Into the sepulchre of dreams forever gone.

Notes we exchange in  joy and sadness 

Get inside my heart as I laugh and cry

Uniting joy and pain into a  bigger world of

Enchantment  as  on my restless bed I lie

Zipping  the  cries of youth as they die. ###

 

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  • Mushtaq on Mar 18, 2011

    Nice one

  • Socorro Lawas on Mar 19, 2011

    Thank you very much. I appreciate your comment. I’ll try to write more poems.

  • Socorro Lawas on Apr 17, 2011

    Evelyn, thank you for patronizing me. You’re very appreciative.

    Mushtaq, you encourage me to do better.

  • neopisiva on Aug 14, 2011

    Wonderful!Melodia seems to be a great inspiration for you…a melody of the poem. :)

  • Socorro Lawas on Aug 17, 2011

    Melodia, a physician’s wife, used to be my classmate in high school way back when. We met again at Facebook already great grandmothers.

  • Socorro Lawas on Aug 25, 2011

    Thank you guys. You flatter me with your comments.

  • Socorro Lawas on Sep 21, 2011

    Best friends are always fondly remembered.

  • Socorro Lawas on Sep 22, 2011

    Raul and Evelyn: Thank you for following me.

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