Exactly how a kiss with him makes me feel.

Kissing you is like
Diving head first
Into the deep end
Of a giant swimming pool
Filled with Ghirardelli brownie batter;
In other words,
Complete and utter bliss.

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  • mdegenhardt on Oct 28, 2008

    Now this is something the average male can understand, food. Yes, this is expressive and so perfect for making one understand. Love this write. Michael

  • Christy Tuller on Oct 28, 2008

    WOW! This is wonderful Autumnrose!

  • Autumnrose on Oct 28, 2008

    Thanks for the comments! Michael, I tried to find your username and check out some of your work, but I couldn’t, so if you ever see this again, thanks!

  • Melody SJAL on Oct 28, 2008

    Wonderful!

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