There are time when we must decide whether we will go with the crowd or stand firm on our decisions.

                    

Do you go out by yourself or stay in a crowd?

Where in order to be heard, you must speak aloud

Does it matter that you cannot introspect?

Or that that someone nearby may disrespect?

 

To be alone is less troublesome

For in this state one would not succumb

To a noisome tyrant who derives his power

From someone over whom he can tower.

 

It is easy to be in a noisy crowd,

For all one does is follow the proud

The one who has it all worked out

The one who leads with one big shout.

 

The quiet one can go his own way

To be gone tomorrow or here today

To make a decision without delay

Without going to another to ask if he may.

 

The one in the crowd has someone to blame,

If the leader’s decision caused one shame.

Because they followed his point of view,

Someone no doubt will threaten to sue.

 

There is no help to the one who strays,

For if he falls down, there he stays,

He must provide his every need

And himself, he must feed.

 

Do you go out by yourself or stay in a crowd?

Where in order to be heard, you must speak aloud

Does it matter that you cannot introspect?

Would you do this again in retrospect?

There are advantages and disadvantages to being in a crowd and being alone.  Even though the leader may not be effective, there is help from others in a crowd.  The one who stands alone must risk not having the help he/she needs.  Thriving in a group is a process of growth which is not available to the one who is alone.  At times, solitude is necessary, but not as a way of life.

Jesus learned what it means to be alone.  His disciples deserted him in stead of taking a stand on his behalf and was crucified because he took a stand which was contrary to the beliefs of the religious leaders of the time.  The end result was one of good; all of mankind was able to be redeemed from their sins.  But, Jesus paid the price for us all.   Glory to God.

  

                   

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  • ashan1614 on May 11, 2011

    If we don’t stand for something, we will fall for anything. I’ve never been much of a crowd follower, and that left me alone many time. So be it. I’d rather make my own mistakes than blindly follow someone else.

  • foxpete88 on May 11, 2011

    I agree your opinion. well done…thanks.-

  • Karen Gross on May 11, 2011

    I liked your poem very much, and I get your point about making our own decisions and accepting the consequences of our actions. I don\’t think we need to go through life alone though, – I\’m sure you didn\’t mean that.

  • CletaB on May 11, 2011

    Well done!

  • Eunice Tan on May 11, 2011

    Very well said.

  • LadyElena on May 11, 2011

    Very wise words and I agree with Ashan too.

  • Gail Cavanaugh on May 12, 2011

    Karen, ultimately, no one is ever alone because the Lord is with us. But some do go their own way. The history books are full of people who took a stand and became great in spite of it. These people ended up making life better for others.

  • payaltyagi on May 12, 2011

    Great Posting
    Keep it up

  • OhSugar on May 12, 2011

    Very heartfelt and inspiring piece. Great job.

  • prospectboy on May 12, 2011

    Very inspiring. You gotta march to the beat of your own drum, even when it’s unpopular with the majority. Thanks for sharing.

  • Ruby Hawk on May 12, 2011

    Inspiring, I’m afraid that I’m a loner myself. I love my friends but my decisions are my own.

  • Tulan on May 12, 2011

    Let us hope we would stand up for what we believe in.

  • Ambi2010 on May 12, 2011

    well written.

  • papaleng on May 13, 2011

    Excellent observation, But I do live by this principle, It is better to be alone doing God’s will , than be with a crowd doing your own will.

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