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To Temptation

alc on Nov 3, 2009
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For it’s a love hate relationship.

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I enjoy you every now and then,

But, sometimes you can be pushy.

Throwing things up in my face,

Making me feel out of place.

I’ve tried ditching you a few times,

Yet, you always weasel your way back into my mind.

You said you were suppose to be my friend,

I guess I’ve won in the end.

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  • Themax on Nov 3, 2009

    Great poem thank you!!!!

  • CrystalFlute on Nov 3, 2009

    Yoou never know who is really your friend and who isn’t. Well written poem!

  • diamondpoet on Nov 3, 2009

    Very nice, I liked it.

  • lillyrose on Nov 3, 2009

    Good write!

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 3, 2009

    I know what it\’s like having someone throw things up in your face. My husband does that to me constantly.

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 3, 2009

    In a situation like this I don’t think anyone wins.

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 3, 2009

    Great piece of work..

  • RS Wing on Nov 3, 2009

    Yes you have an interesting literary voice today. Men and Women can be so very different, like opposites. Surely hold your ground and do what your heart tells you. Better days are always ahead!

  • Petalm on Nov 3, 2009

    Interesting.

  • Teves on Nov 3, 2009

    Great article…well done.

  • AlmaG on Nov 3, 2009

    Wonderful poem… I love it ^_^

  • Luohan Wei on Nov 3, 2009

    Thanx for sharing

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 3, 2009

    Wonderful creative write on a great subject!! Great flow to your wording!

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 3, 2009

    some friends are like that.

  • Jane Jane on Nov 4, 2009

    I like it. nice piece.

  • Atanacio on Nov 4, 2009

    very good entry– well done

  • STEVE666 on Nov 4, 2009

    Honest piece.

  • larry84 on Nov 4, 2009

    good write

  • T. S. GARP on Nov 4, 2009

    Good one!

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Dec 21, 2009

    This poem reminds me of a past relationship. The guy always found a way to blame me for everything and throw things in my face. He even ditched me a few times. But my pride is stronger than my love for him so basically I just ignored him and he always came back looking for me. And then when he did, I just ignored him because it was usually at his convenience, which reminds me of what you wrote in your first line. I enjoy you every now and then.
    Excellent poem.

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