What happens when a foreigner meets a native Japanese girl who he doesn’t know? Is he smitten forever or is that for one night only?

Bustling streets of Tokyo town

and the neon green blinds me.

Cars zooming in the blurry night.

Here! The night is alive!

Come around, to the night of

love when the magic is alive.

To Tokyo, with love.

I see her walking past

those market stalls and still

the neon signs shine.

Posh restaurants juxtaposed

with smiling stall keepers.

She is radiant in the night’s love.

To Tokyo, with love.

Walking behind her, stranger.

Stranger, I follow her padding

On the strident ground but still

It’s the night of passion so

I won’t leave her yet, she

Might go before I know.

To Tokyo, with love.

She stops in a spot of spotlight

darkness, I freeze in my own

shadow. The excitement of

the passion struck night is palpable.

Following her so far, through the

crowd is my darker impassioned entity.

To Tokyo, with love.

She halts. I halt. And then comes

the moment. She realises I’m a

stranger, I’m not stranger to her!

We share that kiss, a surge, a roller

coaster, a neon sign of hunger, a

whirlpool of emotions between us.

To Tokyo, with love.

The connection is cracked and she

breathes into my ear. A soft sniffle

by that beautiful Japanese geisha.

Her face and eyes swept with the

pungent need of my company.

She says, “Bye, until you arrive next.”

To Tokyo, With Love.

I watch my love fade into the

swallowing darkness and she

leaves, heartless after our first

kiss. She’s my lady, my one night fever,

but I have to leave Japan now, London

beckons me for it’s own ardour,

To Tokyo, With Love.

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  • Kaavs on Sep 7, 2009

    Cute poem,…

  • Yovita Siswati on Sep 7, 2009

    sweet poem!

  • loualbert on Sep 7, 2009

    Oh, those geisha women! Are not they something?

    I enjoyed reading this piece, but I thought you could have done a little more with the stanzas, but I`m only talking from my perspective. Maybe from your point of view you came to the conclution that yopu did all you could with this poem. I`m just a little tough with organization when it comes to poetry. I concern myself with lines, stanza-length, punctuation and so on.

    I think you put a good effort here.

    Check me out on the site; will you, please!

  • chitragopi on Sep 7, 2009

    lovely poem and pictures

  • cutedrishti8 on Sep 7, 2009

    Nice one to share..Great work…Nice poem..

  • Papa Sparks on Sep 7, 2009

    Love the images and the way this one flows.

  • Rajesh Kumar Ram on Sep 7, 2009

    very nice!

  • LoveDoctor on Sep 7, 2009

    This is a very well-written piece. I like the intro and this verse:

    I watch my love fade into the

    swallowing darkness and she

    leaves, heartless after our first

    kiss.

  • Guy Hogan on Sep 7, 2009

    I was in Tokyo as a young soldier on my way to Vietnam. This poem brings back lots of memories about war and youth and romance.

  • PR Mace on Sep 7, 2009

    What a dear poem. I loved reading it.

  • Shamanz on Sep 7, 2009

    aww that is very cute. well written Atikin! Another reason why I really enjoyed this is because I’m planning to go to Japan soon myself as a foreigner, still learning japanese =D

    Thanks for sharing!

  • Sourav on Sep 7, 2009

    Nice poem!

  • Lostash on Sep 7, 2009

    Excellent, Nikita! Your style is evolving with every new piece!

  • CA Johnson on Sep 7, 2009

    What a beautiful poem! It was so romantic! I loved it!

  • Diverseblogger on Sep 7, 2009

    Beautiful Poem! So romantic and I just added you as a friend!

  • emmahaynes on Sep 7, 2009

    Great poem, very heart warming. Thanks for the share =]

  • Ruby Hawk on Sep 7, 2009

    very thought provoking, I like it.

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 8, 2009

    In my case my son went back to Japan and married her and we now have a two year old grandson. That is such a beautiful poem.

    Christine

  • Jane Jane on Sep 8, 2009

    I love this one. It’s sweet..

  • CaSundara on Sep 8, 2009

    I like this poem, what inspired you to write it?

  • Francois Hagnere on Sep 8, 2009

    You are very talented. Bravo!

  • Nikita K on Sep 8, 2009

    @CaSundara – I’ve always found geisha’s really interesting and I wonder that even though their aim is to entertain men, surely there should be some other emotions too. Maybe all of the male attention has hardened them to true love. I just think that it is nice to get the perspective of a man who doesn’t see a geisha as entertainment but as love.

  • PhoenixRox on Sep 9, 2009

    Wonderful piece my dear Atikin.Loved the concept as well. Keep up the good work. :)

  • Collette Edwards on Sep 9, 2009

    Great Poem, You are wise beyond your years, Love your work as always but then would exspect nothing less from you, Yet, Slow down and enjoy your youth while you still can, It\’s all to gone way to soon as it is ….. LOVE IT!! :)

  • Melody SJAL on Sep 9, 2009

    Wow, that was very good.

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