My Weakness.

Its amazing how a single rose,

could make a tender heart bloom,

or even watch the petals fall on ,a sunny afternoon

beg the pardon of the day in a hand and hand walk,

and watch your beauty balance,

carress the talk,,.,got me

lost in a zone

admiring your perfection

putting my heart in your hands

its yours for your protection

kidnapped by your love

invincible by your guidance

has me hypnotized in

TODAYS WALK

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  • webseowriters on Sep 6, 2010

    Thanks for sharing

  • Alaina Ellington on Sep 6, 2010

    beautiful…thanks for sharing : )

  • Dehan Nathaniel on Sep 6, 2010

    Beautiful

  • giftarist on Sep 6, 2010

    Wow, that’s an awesome read.

  • The Soul Explorer on Sep 6, 2010

    Great poem!

  • melphens on Sep 6, 2010

    Love this!!

  • GodsGrace on Sep 7, 2010

    Brilliant poem

  • ellenhart on Sep 9, 2010

    I enjoyed this poem a whole lot very nice to read

  • Renee Hudson on Sep 24, 2010

    Very nice poem. As I’ve said before, keep ‘em coming. To deny the world of your poetry is denying the world of a light bringing talent.

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