Together We Will Travel

quiet voice on Nov 25, 2011

Tags: Effort, Journey, mine, shared, shelter, take, together

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Two, can sometimes be stronger than one.

I’ll take your hand,

If you will take mine.

I will always shelter you,

If you will try to shelter me.

Together, if we put

Each other first,

With an earnest effort,

The journey going forward,

Could be a journey shared.

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Comments (15)

LadyElena on Nov 25, 2011
A journey shared is always an enjoyable one…. well…. most times.

Lovely Poem.
megamatt09 on Nov 25, 2011
Well spoken words.
Ruby Hawk on Nov 25, 2011
very nice,
quiet voice on Nov 25, 2011
…LadyElena, megamatt and Ruby, thank you all very much..
Angelji on Nov 25, 2011
Cool…
lapasan on Nov 25, 2011
Oh, its romantic!
Vivek Ratan on Nov 26, 2011
we are together
a nice journey runs
all lovely places
to us welcome
smiling with each other
flowers we become
stares at us a butterfly
we laugh and fun

beautiful poem,quiet voice
Yvhes P. on Nov 26, 2011
Very touching poem. Great share =)
hnaboro on Dec 7, 2011
Very touching thoughts, good dedication for a loved one..Quiet Voice
K V Venkataramana on Dec 27, 2011
Very interesting and full of sincerity.
MJRapp on Dec 31, 2011
Liked it! Very nice.
FX777222999 on Dec 31, 2011
Really romantic and touching.
conundrum on Jan 16, 2012
A well-written prose! It captivates the emotion of those who read them! So moving!
quiet voice on Jan 16, 2012
Thanks to everyone of you, for reading and commenting. Take care.
somiasom on Jan 21, 2012
Good and very well written.. Thanks for share

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