A controversial love composition titled from the one I implicate and dedicate. A rarely possible love story to happen at this very moment of time…

Tongkat

By: Rionel “2tet” Belen Caldo

It’s all in you

A jailing deja vu

Eternal beauty is cue

Grace has no due

Intelligence at its best

Patience is to zest

Kindness has no rest

Sweetness on the nest

Hair so perfectly arranged

Seducing eyes has no range

Pointed nose is to page

Kissable lips of sage

Versatile lavender artist

Singing voice of praying mantis

Background of happy bees

Smile at brilliant name mist

To touch is to tease thee

To feel is to steal key

To dance is a panoramic view

To embrace is a dream adieu

To kiss you is shooting star’s glee

To experience you is heaven’s knee

No matter how prayers are hardened

Love’s heart will never be softened

For it belongs to somebody’s crowded oven

Sooner, it will take vows at God’s ordain

Everyday is a taste of wounded lying art

Wishing an early life’s end to start

Gearing towards a wonderful next life

To know about love, I used to knife

An era that I can be with my dearest love

A hope of having my first and last dove

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  • rutherfranc on Jun 23, 2009

    sounded really wistful.. hope this comes to reality for you..

  • irishpen on Jun 27, 2009

    For someone so young, you sound weary. To have had so many loves, to be gearing towards a wonderful “next life”???

    “an era” where you can be with your “dearest love”..

    “everyday is a taste of wounded lying art” ???

    I hope your heart love returns to you..but you are sooo young!

    Life is to be lived! If it is TRUE LOVE–it would not HURT SOOO much!! That is not what GOD INTENDED for us…

    Beautiful and sad and touching writing,…~peace~

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 27, 2009

    very nice,

  • CutestPrincess on Jul 10, 2009

    you really have talent…

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