Touch Me Once Again

Lady Sunshine on Nov 15, 2009

Tags: again, caress, Peaks, stroke, touch, valleys

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Touch me, boy…touch me once again.

Touch me once again, boy
Not once
Nor twice
But three times over again

A caress over here
A stroke over there
Your fingers touching
Everywhere!

From peaks to valleys
And places in between
Gliding ever gently
Exquisitely

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Comments (11)

Hansika on Nov 15, 2009
wonderful…exquisite really
K.Reshma on Nov 15, 2009
Lovely
Papa Sparks on Nov 15, 2009
Very passionate writing my dear friend. You are quite good at writing these kinds of poems.
ken bultman on Nov 15, 2009
Intriguing request that will likely be honored since it appears to have been written with such urgency. An enjoyable read.
Jenny Heart on Nov 15, 2009
Passionately written!
deep blue on Nov 15, 2009
From peaks and valleys to the hills and the rainforest…. Hmmmnnn, Ken was right I haven’t heard a lady in distress to beam such SOS. Well written.
Christine Ramsay on Nov 15, 2009
Beautiful and tantalising

Christine
Themax on Nov 15, 2009
well written sunshine,you got that pure vibe
Teves on Nov 15, 2009
Excellent…
Shirley Shuler on Nov 15, 2009
Hi Lady Sunshine, a very passionate piece, written with such passion!
Atanacio on Nov 15, 2009
A perfect little piece Frank

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