It’s when you a relationship ends but for some reason you start losing how they made you feel but the physical emptiness of them being gone still yearns for that person.

Surrounded in darkness
It’s only your voice that I hear
I feel nothing
But I yearn
For your touch
You echo deep with in me
Not a day goes by
When I don’t think of you
I need the brush of your lips
In my reality
Some how I lost you
I wait
Alone in this motion
Of nothingness
My pulse races
My heart will break through
Do you feel it?
I reach out
I can almost touch you
The air around me changes
I see nothing
Can you see me?
They say you can feel love
Do you feel me?
If I reach deep inside
I can almost
But you’re not there

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  • 8Shei8 on Feb 9, 2010

    and I sleep next to emptiness with tears on my eyes (now I know you and I dated the same guy!)

  • S A JOHNSON on Feb 9, 2010

    Thanks for being my first comment on this one…People didn’t start commenting till I had a couple pages worth of work in here and it seems that no one really likes to see what was there in the beginning.

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