Few lines on my son.

Touch wood, my son is a real beauty

© 2010 Dr.P.Elayaraja


Touch wood, touch wood, touch wood,

My son is so beautiful……

As beautiful as a dew on the flower,

As beautiful as a lawful awesome lover,

His drooling becomes my holy river,

Being with him makes seconds the hour,

Touch wood he was born as we had planned,

Footed in our minds has begun to stand,

We never knew his beauty when he was scanned,

He is a perfect picture made by our DNA strand,

The charm that he spews is always really grand,

I wonder if he holds a kind of magic wand,


© 2010 Dr.P.Elayaraja





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  • jennifer eiffel01 on Apr 23, 2010

    Good thoughts! Great poem!
    If that picture is your son, he is adorable! Let’s just say you have the cutest son in the world and I have the cutest grandson in the world. (I want a grand daughter, but my daughter refuses to have another baby because she is almost 43 and my other daughter lives with my husband and me and doesn’t want to get married or have kids.

  • drelayaraja on Apr 23, 2010

    More of my SON at http://www.nithyll.com

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Apr 23, 2010

    A very good song.

  • chayanika on Apr 23, 2010

    God bless your son. He is a darling :)

  • Wilbart26 on Apr 23, 2010

    Wow, he is cute.

  • Lord Banks on Apr 23, 2010

    What a sweet poem, children really are a gift. Well done. LB

  • Starpisces on Apr 23, 2010

    nice poem, cute son, clever father

  • singming12 on Apr 23, 2010

    wow thats soooo cute

  • singming12 on Apr 23, 2010

    thats a good poem too

  • Moses Ingram on Apr 23, 2010

    Such a cute little boy. I love your poem too.

  • Atanacio on Apr 23, 2010

    you should be more than proud :)

  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 23, 2010

    He certainly is beautiful and I can understand how you feel. You must be so proud of him. A lovely poem.


  • CA Johnson on Apr 23, 2010

    This is a great poem about your son. He is adorable.

  • giftarist on Apr 23, 2010

    Cute little person. Wonderful share about your son, doc.

  • LoveDoctor on Apr 23, 2010

    He’s so cute! sweet poem.

  • VTech on Apr 23, 2010

    Good Post

  • maeraquel on Apr 23, 2010

    Beautiful boy. You are a very loving parent.

  • wonder on Apr 24, 2010

    A cute son, he deserves more poems.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Apr 24, 2010

    OMG..Your son is absolutely beautiful…what a handsome little fella.

  • sara20 on Apr 24, 2010

    Interesting post with lost of fun and i know useful info. Thanks


  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 24, 2010

    He is a beautiful baby. You have every right to be proud.

  • JannyCZ on Apr 24, 2010

    Awww so sweet! Great tribute to your son.

  • xoxo on Apr 24, 2010

    Sooo cute- kid and poem. Likes it. Kids are such a blessing!

  • Johanny Lisbeth on Apr 27, 2010

    You’re absolutely right, he’s a beauty! Excellent, excellent poem. God bless you both, dear friend :)

  • LOVELYHONEY on Apr 27, 2010

    I am not at all superstitious,
    All the same lets all touch wood.
    I’d come and bless your son
    If I could
    So touch wood.

    Let me on behalf of all say
    How lovely is your beloved son?
    We love him all the way
    One and all,
    So we all must say
    In chorus with you
    Touch wood
    Touch wood
    Touch wood
    We all however are
    Not at all superstitious
    Still lets all touch wood.

    Lovely Honey on behalf of all TOUCH WOOD

  • yes me on Apr 27, 2010

    That was great Doc, kids are great I have four Grandsons youngest 4yrs and I have a step grand Daughter 8 mths no end of Fun when they are here…. enjoy your Son and let him enjoy you. cheers Doc and say Hi to the wee man form me.

  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 27, 2010

    He’s still a little sweetie.

  • sara20 on Apr 28, 2010

    Keep writing more about this topic.

  • neha80 on Apr 30, 2010

    Interesting post, just today i know more about it. Good subject selection for writing articles. Thanks for sharing this good one.

  • ShadowPsychos on May 2, 2010

    your son is gorgeous…great write :)

  • lillyrose on May 2, 2010

    that was so beautiful!!!!! and so is he, I can’t believe how much he has grown from the first pics I saw of him!

  • sunitakrb on May 6, 2010

    Nice Writing and sharing Good & informative Piece. Thanks and Cheers.


  • heartily on May 12, 2010

    a very thoughtful poem from a father to his son.

  • gaby7 on May 12, 2010

    He is awesome, real men touch wood, am glad you are instilling in him the spirit of exploration. Good poem!

  • T. S. Lewis on May 19, 2010

    He’s too cute. God bless

  • sasuke191 on Jun 6, 2010

    This is such a nice poem.. And I must agree your son is really cute!.. :)

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