This poem about tough times was written in a space of less than 15 minutes directly on a WEbook project site in response to a request.

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Tough Times

(c) Jim Swettenham  June 14, 2009

History, they say, is a one way street

But sometimes events seem to repeat

We have had wars and wars and wars

that have taken our troops to far away shores.

After each one ’tis said “Never again” -

A few years later we’re shipping off men.

Our current depressing economic strife

is not the first one experienced in life.

Think back to the roaring 1920’s a while

people were living high and in style.

Then the bottom of the economy fell

people thought they were headed for hell.

Several stories are told of the ‘29 Crash

as for highrise windows people did dash.

Out through the glass, crash to the ground -

Thuds and anguish cries were common sound

People struggled to live through recession

then the weather brought Great Depression

The rains dried up and the winds did blow

drifting the dirt just like it was snow.

Families gathered and closed up ranks

as machinery was buried under dirt banks

People did dig pretty deep holes

just to find tops of telephone poles.

Many people saw bank statements in red

as to northern land their wagons were led.

Many did struggle, dug deep in their heart

with determined grit they made a new start.

And so it is as we now face a new day

many feel hopeless and full of dismay.

Think of our forefathers in days now past -

know in your heart these conditions won’t last

The horizon is painted with bright shiny hue

and we like the others can all start anew.

This was written in a space of less than 15 minutes directly on a WEbook project site.

 

 

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  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 4, 2009

    excellent for the short fuse

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 4, 2009

    All true, It’s life repeated over and over again since the beginning of time.

  • lillyrose on Oct 5, 2009

    that is a wonderful poem, so much meaning right from the heart, it made me go cold and it reminded me of all the minors strikes we had in the 80’s.

    I guess its true to form that the world is like a spinning top and it just keeps repeating its self. x

  • Write Easy on Oct 9, 2009

    Excellent…this is the truth in our lives. We should never give up. If we do, we lost it. Your poem had a strong postive tinge. Through out the poem, you only talked about negatives and then out of the blue, you point out that people could come out of it smiling! Very touching! Amazing that you could complete it in 15 mins! keep these coming! cant wait for more!

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 21, 2009

    Loved this one Jimbo!!! The parallel you drew between the days gone by and today’s times, wow. That is so true. And ohhhh boy! You did it again..15 mins? That has to be a record for such an awesome poem.

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 13, 2009

    Came back. Had to read this again

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 14, 2009

    Excellant piece, you brought together a common theme. You have skills my friend. :)

  • Colleen Ranney on Feb 7, 2010

    Loved it! There is a never ending challenge the human spirit faces . Maybe that’s where wrinkles really come from?

  • LadyElena on Nov 11, 2010

    Its lovely but sadly these tough times seem to be on the increase. Our Government in UK are cutting on so many things now – the economy is not looking Good.

    …. but you know what they say “when the going gets tough, the tough get going” :)

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