Towards Our Future

Bruce Officer on Aug 27, 2011

A poem, dedicated to my sweetheart.

Towards Our Future

Hold my hand, together we

Will climb that hill

However steep and rocky be the way

Though the dark conspires

We’ll struggle on until

We crest the ridge into the light of day

From there a splendid vista

Opens up ahead

Our life together laid out in the sun

We smile, and in our eyes

A thousand things unsaid

As towards our future hand in hand we run

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Comments (11)

Prakash Vaghela on Aug 27, 2011
nice sharing
Karen Gross on Aug 27, 2011
Lovely poem. Wishing you safe travail as you climb that steep, rocky hill.
Brenda Nelson on Aug 27, 2011
Very bright and inspirational
Christina Noll on Aug 27, 2011
beautiful!
Jaydoo on Aug 28, 2011
very nice. something to look forward to on the way up, at the top, and on the way down.
Socorro Lawas on Aug 29, 2011
Cool, romantic. I wish I were young again.
MountainGirl on Aug 29, 2011
Very beautiful and romantic in so many ways.
You always have to to look for the future; and you better make it a good one.
Joe Ram on Aug 30, 2011
Lovely and very sweet.
NancyNolanAustin on Sep 5, 2011
beautiful poem and sentimental
Socorro Lawas on Sep 6, 2011
Positivism.
Margaret Boseroy on Sep 19, 2011
Beautiful poem.

Hi there!