Towing Daisy on My Bike

erwinkennythomas on Feb 1, 2012

After buying Daisy a cone, I towed her on my bike to her home and it turned out to be a thrilling experience.

Daisy, don’t leave me alone

Let me buy you a cone

I know you like berries

Especially strawberries

- – -

Let me bring you home

It’s time to pass by Tom’s dome

The one he built

Out of Styrofoam

- – -

Daisy, let me tow you on my bike

It’s better than taking a hike

You see, I don’t have a car

To bring you places afar

- – -

Please sit still on the handle

Because I feel I’ll tremble

For I don’t want you to fall

And cause quite a brawl

- – -

Feel the breeze as it rushes by

Before we say goodbye

For this experience has been

Something we’ve never seen

- – -

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Comments (11)

avissado on Feb 1, 2012
Hey this is so nice I like the rhyming..perhaps it would also be nice if poets could include a small description of their poetry below…it would help us readers to get a deeper understanding and also be appreciative. thanks
Aroosa Gloomy on Feb 1, 2012
Wonderful.Fresh
lapasan on Feb 1, 2012
Daisy should be happy reading or hearing this poem.
Rosettaartist1 on Feb 1, 2012
good one
Dora77 on Feb 1, 2012
Erwin,
Car,Cone and bike……Great imagination with Daisy…
Keep going!
FX777222999 on Feb 1, 2012
Good to know this.
Martin Kloess on Feb 1, 2012
very good
J M Lennox on Feb 1, 2012
Charming! I love it. It also reminds me of an old song my mother sang to myself and my sisters many years ago, and which I sang to my daughters (which includes someone called Daisy and a bike)….”Daisy, daisy – give me your answer do…” (the start of it). Thanks Erwin. You gave me lots of nice memories as well as a very enjoyable poem to read.
Eunike on Feb 1, 2012
Sounds romantic
gaby7 on Feb 2, 2012
Liked this!
PR Mace on Feb 4, 2012
How cute.

Hi there!