Tragic.

Far beyond the truth of being in love is a tragic, a tragic we don’t by our naked eye see. For we expect that when we love someone, that someone must love us, repaid us the amount of love we pour, what if that someone doesn’t love you the way you want it?, does it means he/she doesn’t love you? Or perhaps, on the other sense, that someone you love afraid or hesitant to show to her/his fellow the affection of her/his love, which make the former, the lover, to be cold and have the doubts that the latter doesn’t proud of her/his and doesn’t love him/her at all. Of all this tragic, it seems that true love doesn’t exist in the association of lovers, it somehow exist in the metaphysical realities that when we say “I love you” and “I accept you”, we somehow mean “Love me as I love you” and “I have accept you, your good and not your bad”. The happiness of intelligent being that loves comes from being poignant, poignant in the sense that he/she love and sacrifice all, offer what he/she can give and speak of words much true for him/her that she/he cries when he/she speak of it. Yet, bliss, – for he/she love intimately that he/she inanimate the truth of being love in its naked form. Much of that, the answer to the preceding questions is “no” – he/she still loves you. People differ in their ability to show affections, which bring me to poignant sorrow – for I, like you, wanted to be loved. As I think of it in vulnerable miserable sorrow, hurt and continue to love – seems to be the truth I sought.

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  • Teves on Nov 7, 2009

    Great poem…

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 7, 2009

    Don\’t waste your time on someone who doesn\’t love you. There\’s too many fish in the sea.

  • xinnianhao on Nov 7, 2009

    Great!!

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 12, 2009

    not sure if true love even exists. love means different things for different people and very complex

  • Aiyanna on Nov 12, 2009

    True love is elusive for some people and just when they think they have found it fate steps in to prove it wrong… There are other things like when they find the one of their dreams they are attached to someone else…
    Go for the person who loves you for who you are rather then your attributes and material possessions.
    Nice write, made me think!!! :)

  • AlmaG on Nov 12, 2009

    Great article!… For me, true love does exist but it’ll come at the right place and time… at the very moment you never expected. ^_^

  • Hansika on Nov 12, 2009

    wonderful article…!!!

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 12, 2009

    True love does exist if you meet the right person. It is no use wasting it on someone who does not return it. A good article.

    Christine

  • Petalm on Nov 12, 2009

    Good writing.

  • cebuanaeyez on Nov 12, 2009

    There are people who are afraid to be vulnerable and show affections in not direct ways. However, I also agree with Ruby.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 12, 2009

    First let’s get
    Our fundamentals straight

    Is love lust or sex

    Or is love a prelude to sex

    Or is love just love
    Without sex

    As I know there can be no love

    Without sex
    Also no sex without love

    Do what you do

    Some day love and sex

    Will clash anyway

  • Emma Green on Nov 12, 2009

    Well written

  • Eunice Tan on Nov 12, 2009

    I fully agree with Ruby. We may love someone but no need to spend many times for someone who doesn’t love us.

  • Jean on Nov 15, 2009

    Thanks for posting

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 28, 2009

    beautifully written as always!

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