Be careful what you listen too.

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Standing behind the counter in run down public bar

A medley of embellished individuals sit crooning over a jar

Talking absolute vomit to every kind of ignorant soul

Drunken Whinging,scheming and spinning stories in their god forsaken hole

Endless ,recurring, pointless ,reinforced ideas are a poison in my mind

Years of listening to an onslaught of infection leaves me feeling bitter and unkind

Many lives lived in a bid to understand it all

Scars of the mind and body from a spiritual rise and fall

Times are spent in reflection and the changing of my minds beliefs

Repeating my new ideas to replace my transfered griefs

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  • ceegirl on Nov 23, 2009

    great photo and poetry

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 23, 2009

    Very well-written and good imagery. keep up the good work:)
    ooops forbidden comment.

  • drelayaraja on Nov 23, 2009

    Great imagination. Good poem.

  • Rinks Desai on Nov 23, 2009

    you have used good pics

  • Gudu on Nov 24, 2009

    nice imagination and poetry.

  • Linda Lori on Nov 24, 2009

    I like nontoxic ideas too! Great write!

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 24, 2009

    lovely idea and composition.. loved the flow of words

  • giftarist on Nov 24, 2009

    Clever piece! Great work.

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 24, 2009

    Very interesting poem!

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 24, 2009

    Very well written..

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 25, 2009

    I agree with you on all the nonsense around. I am at – changing of my minds beliefs- too. As always Mike, I felt ya with this one too!

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