A poem about life.

Transformation

Dedicated to a certain cause,

Some of us urged to rebel,

Making our lives miserable,

Those around us, living hell.

What brings emotion to evil?

What sense denies it’s right?

The path of misdirection leads

To a devastating line of sight.

We can overcome our sins,

But first we must learn to obey

The calling of the inner soul

Which brings peace of mind our way.

Giving up on someone you love

Because they seem far too lost

Is the way our hearts betray

Devotion that bleeds from the cost.

Never lose determination

Just because you think you’ll lose,

Never give up on someone lost,

Fever of forgiveness lights the fuse.

You have the ability to help this person,

Do not deny yourselves the right to

Change incorrigible to happiness,

This will bring God’s glowing light.

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  • lillyrose on Oct 20, 2009

    A very potent emotional poem, some very good points! A very good read.

  • Goodselfme on Oct 20, 2009

    I sure can feel this poem for my life. Well expressed with depth and truth. Thank you for shaing.

  • Vikram Chhabra on Oct 20, 2009

    Very profoundly said my friend…

  • Jane Jane on Oct 21, 2009

    inspiring for me. good message.

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