For just the briefest of moments…

For a moment

Just the briefest of moments

She was beautiful, gorgeous

Like the luscious apple

That sat on the sideboard

In a ceramic dish

Until I threw it away,

It sides showing the very best of

Red, orange and yellow,

The way sunsets do

When they are showing off,

The stem a celebration of lust

Irrepressible and incomplete.

But the bottom

Where you cannot see,

Hidden by the lip of the bowl, is

Moist, sunken down, rancid and rotten.

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  • Teresa M Sims on Apr 14, 2009

    wow i really understand this poem. most people u meet in life u just cant judge a book by its cover

  • Leafygreens on Apr 15, 2009

    Well written. I wish I could write free verse like this. Keep them coming!

  • OhSugar on Apr 20, 2009

    Wow! I love the flow of this poem, which made it easy to read and grasp its meaning.

  • CutestPrincess on Apr 23, 2009

    Wow! You got me there.

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