Sometimes on this road, we find home.

I remember last night,
You came to my door.
Face lit by the moon,
Eyes filled with longing
And something unfamiliar-
Adoration.

“Traveller, have I met you before?”

I would have charged you with trespassing,
If my walls weren’t already down.
You skillfully made your way along my roads,
Knowing all the bends and curves.

“How did you find me?”

I saw you carried a burden
And you’d travelled very far.
My light was on and I said,

“Come in where it’s warm
And rest a while.
Tell me your story.
I feel I’ll know it quite well.
Eat from my table,
Gain the strength you need.”

In a world with so many people,
It’s still so easy to be lonely.
There last night; though,
The loneliness was at bay.
I found it so strange;
The connection we had.

“Traveller, are you certain
We haven’t met before?”

Veronica Haney © December 2009

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  • cutedrishti8 on Dec 11, 2009

    Wonderful Poem.

  • willie wondka on Dec 11, 2009

    i have done a poem similar to your lines, you can be alone in a busy world, sandie x.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 11, 2009

    VERY NICE

  • BullwinkleMuse on Dec 12, 2009

    A chance encounter at an opportune time, while the walls were down? This timing, and the familiarity of the stranger, suggest that the meeting was in some way predestined.
    Your phrasing alternates between poetic and prosaic; not sure if this was intentional. The stranger’s adoration was intriguing, as was your use of the cottage(?) as a metaphor for your heart/life/inner sanctum (it works in any case).
    I like the story.

  • giftarist on Dec 12, 2009

    A nice piece, great work!

  • mkd1788 on Dec 12, 2009

    good work..nice poem

  • cybertruth on Dec 16, 2009

    enchanting as always. hope all is well; you’re missed ’round here.

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 7, 2010

    very nice…i like it….

  • BradONeill on Jan 11, 2010

    That was really great! Nice work It had a lot of hope in it which I liked.

  • Precious Illusions on Jan 26, 2010

    just love the theme of your poem..keep it up:)

  • jimbob1 on May 6, 2010

    Vee…thank you for providing the safe sanctuary, a place of refuge…this is a precious poem of connecting with a stranger…but it has been said there is no such thing as a stranger…just a friend we haven’t met yet…I really like the vivid invitational image you have word-painted here…marvellous job…thank you

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