Trial of Love

bluepunch on Sep 7, 2009

I want to be loved and forgat the sorrow of loneliness.

Take my hand and stop the tail-spin

As a talisman takeover and heal my tormented heart

That’s torn apart by a talon in my past

Teach my heart to forget my troubles

Help me translate the confusion within

Confusion carried by endless tributaries

Tributaries of tribulation and trials

Tricky to tackle alone

Take control and stop my tears

Prevent the trauma and save my tomorrow

And make today’s dream lost forever

Touch my heart not forgetting my soul

As you learn to tolerate my actions

For my love for you cries out for help

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Lily River on Sep 8, 2009
I kind of think about the Book of Revelation when I read this piece. The world will heal itself because that was God’s promise, so there will come a day when things will be better and happy if we just believe. I used to be afraid, but I know now that I can’t make my plans for my future around fear, and that I need to live while I am here as much as I can. Life is too short to be afraid of everything!
simplicity on Sep 8, 2009
i like your writing
diamondpoet on Sep 25, 2009
I like this, it was intense, Make more friends someone else can see your great writing.

Hi there!