Trip to The Local Mall

Darla Cooke on Sep 13, 2009

Tags: Automatic Doors, Checkout Lines, Discounts, displays, Escalator, mall, Sales Items, salesperson, Security Cameras, stores

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A poem.

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I drive to the local Mall

I carefully park my car.

I walk through the automatic doors,

then I take the escalator.

I see displays on all the floors,

showing sales items and discounts.

A salesperson is standing nearby,

there are security cameras everywhere.

People are waiting in checkout lines,

impatient to leave the crowded stores.

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Comments (9)

LOVELYHONEY on Sep 13, 2009
stop that guy see him can u

Halt who goes there
Stop it hurts there
Down below
Stop that quickly
Will you go start again?
For the hurt is fun
Don’t stop me again
If you want to enjoy
Stop your urge man
Stop
Just halt for this one time again
It hurts now please do and don’t stop
Go on again and again
Use delete button
If u really want to stop
And never cum again
syedaqa on Sep 13, 2009
Nice trip thanks for sharing

Best regards
Walter Holstad on Sep 13, 2009
lh is crazy lol
Walter Holstad on Sep 13, 2009
very poetic
ken bultman on Sep 13, 2009
But did you buy anything?
Tanya Wallace on Sep 13, 2009
Great little poem, the ending was oh so true! I hate crowded stores and try to avoid them as much as possible.lol
CA Johnson on Sep 13, 2009
Great poem! I think we can all relate to a crazy shopping day like that. Great job! I loved it!
Shamanz on Sep 13, 2009
Taking an everyday idea and putting it into a fun poem. Very nice!
Marie Milton on Sep 14, 2009
Great piece : ))

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