A taxi ride through Tripoli, lebanon.

We drive between a procession of sandstone apartments,
Stern as sentries patrolling the road.
Towering Apartments partly obscure panorama of snow-capped mountains,
Minaret’s fitted with loudspeakers.
Car fumes mix with freshly baked kaak, both chocking and refreshing.
Deep sobering freckles scar walls and tarnished bank facades.
Car horns chatter to one another constantly,
The taxis overdose of passengers mirrors shop clusters,
Tiny internet cafes squat by mobile phone shops,
Eagar to close for mid-day prayer.
While abandoned fruit carts partially block narrow streets,
As passengers warm velvet smiles spill out, personal space is once more introduced.
Human stampedes of comic riots dominate headlines,
Her glance supersedes it all.

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Comments (9)
  • CHAN LEE PENG on Oct 7, 2008

    Good poem, take care!

  • goodselfme on Oct 7, 2008

    Great imagery in this well done piece.Thank you for the read.

  • jo oliver on Oct 7, 2008

    nice poem, thanks

  • Eden Emersen on Oct 9, 2008

    Your works are always so fun to read; great description

  • Chris Stonecipher on Oct 9, 2008

    Great Poem! Thanks.

  • Allison Jae on Nov 19, 2008

    Great poem. I like the way you paint a picture with your words. I can see it all happening as I was reading. Thanks for sharing.

  • Fogwalker on Nov 19, 2008

    I love it, you have quite a talent! Thank you for sharing :-D

  • Ash on Nov 20, 2008

    very nice poem good job:)

  • eddiego65 on Nov 23, 2008

    Nice poem! Thanks for the tour of Tripoli.

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