When we were dating, we would often play Trivial Pursuit. Here’s how I proposed and how we both won.

There was a year in our courtship
When she was here and I was in New York.
To visit her, I’d take a monthly trip,
For if I hadn’t, I’d just go berserk.

I realized that she was just the one
I wanted to be with eternally,
And I worked hard, her hand I finally won.
There was no doubt she was the one for me

When we would meet, our fav’rite game to play
Was Trivial Pursuit, a lot of fun,
And with that game we’d often end the day.
It really didn’t matter much who won.

So one time when I came to visit her,
I stacked the deck with well disguised game cards.
To draw the special cards, my plan was sure
To work.  I knew that it would melt her heart.

After a few questions, I was anxious.
She drew the card most unsuspectingly:
“Dear will you marry me?  Oh please say yes!”
She laughed and cried, then said she’d marry me!

You know that life’s not Trivial Pursuit
That years of work can often come undone
We need to focus, or the point is moot
But in this marriage game, we both have won.

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  • Melinda McQueen on Jan 22, 2009

    Awwwwww that’s so sweet!

  • Glynis Smy on Jan 22, 2009

    Brilliant!

  • QuinMonty86 on Jan 22, 2009

    What a romantic way, and so original. Loved it!!

  • Joie Schmidt on Jan 22, 2009

    How sweet and romantic – I love it!!!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Little Miss Lizzy on Jan 22, 2009

    Awww – you big ole softie you! what a lovely way of popping the question!

  • papaleng on Jan 22, 2009

    Oh this so cute and romantic Joel, thanks for sharing it.

  • Betty Carew on Jan 22, 2009

    awwwww love is so sweet, great job on this one nutuba your wife is a lucky woman

  • Eunice Tan on Jan 22, 2009

    Very well said.

  • Patrick Bernauw on Jan 23, 2009

    Ah, this is a wonderful poetic & true story!

  • Karen Gross on Jan 23, 2009

    How romantic!

  • poetic enigma on Jan 23, 2009

    This is a beautiful poem,
    so romantic and lovely,
    Terrific write :)

  • S A JOHNSON on Jan 23, 2009

    I agree that was very romantic!

  • Morgana on Jan 24, 2009

    You’ve done it again…you’ve melted my heart. Lovely poem.

  • Maria Blazz on Jan 24, 2009

    She must be very proud of you, not only for the proposal but for this poem.

  • Colleen Ranney on Jan 26, 2009

    Beautiful! oh i love lovers.

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