Needing a good night sleep.

 

It seems that once again,

I suddenly dreamed of you.

It was very unexpected,

leaving me feeling amazed.

Now I’m feeling worried,

for I have much concern.

I’ve begun having trouble,

sleeping through the night.

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Comments (11)
  • Jane Jane on Sep 12, 2009

    missing someone.=)

  • cardy on Sep 12, 2009

    Hope you find a good nights sleep soon, liked this a lot.

  • Yovita Siswati on Sep 12, 2009

    Nice poem! hope you find your good night sleep soon.

  • Brenda Nelson on Sep 12, 2009

    When I was younger I nearly always struggled with sleeping, but up until the last week or so havent had a problem.. lately the donkey is keeping me awake and some other crap in my mind too.. awe well.. maybe tonight..

  • syedaqa on Sep 12, 2009

    Nice poem great work thanks for sharing

    Best regards

  • ken bultman on Sep 12, 2009

    Sweet dreams.

  • mystery61 on Sep 12, 2009

    I hope you get a goodnight sleep soon!

  • kizichat on Sep 12, 2009

    memories… a two edged sword. This time it cut you. Hope the wound heals soon, hope you get to sleep soon.

  • Emma Green on Sep 13, 2009

    A real good write!

  • STEVE666 on Sep 14, 2009

    Good write, Darla.
    Trouble sleeping? Pop a pill!

  • CutestPrincess on Oct 2, 2009

    trouble sleeping is not new to me… im insomniac! nice poem

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