Troubled Mind

clay hurtubise on Jun 2, 2009

Tags: after life, brain damage, Cerebral cortex, cure, depression, drugs, neuron, TBI

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Just some rantings while dealing with a blue day.

Image via Wikipedia (neurons in cerebral cortex)

Words of wisdom comfort not,

Pill to cure can’t be bought.

Mind damaged by reckless event,

Never the same, neurons spent.

Value of life: know I do.

Way I am I do not choose.

Weather and friends, all so nice,

Hope next life not filled with strife.

Other Clay rantings:

http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/Flight.533367

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Comments (24)

Launie and Melynda Sorrels on Jun 2, 2009
Very nice clay. Short but concise in the message that it brings.
goodselfme on Jun 2, 2009
Well expressed feelings in a great prose, my friend!
OhSugar on Jun 2, 2009
Love it, and I got the meaning right away. Very Nicely done.
Christine Ramsay on Jun 2, 2009
Such an expressive piece. I can feel your mood so well.

Christine
Deep Blue on Jun 2, 2009
Well sometimes it’s a head banging experience. Nice lines though. Thanks for sharing.
Used to be Shelly on Jun 2, 2009
Way I am I do not choose. Well put, it seems like people misunderstand that about being depressed. If you could stop obviously you would. I love this poem Clay, honestly. It really hits home. Thank you.
Sheila M on Jun 2, 2009
I hear ya on this one~ hope you are feeling better!
revivor on Jun 2, 2009
well spoken – revivor
Lostash on Jun 2, 2009
If you can’t rant to us, then who instead!
mdartist on Jun 2, 2009
This one is a very creative piece. I can feel the pain of depression through it. Very nice!
rutherfranc on Jun 2, 2009
you sounded so bored.. lighten up Clay!
Ruby Hawk on Jun 2, 2009
Clay, I am with you on this one. Give me an easier one next time around, please.
Debra. on Jun 2, 2009
Straight to the point. Great job expressing this one, Clay.
Princess Dre on Jun 2, 2009
Clay – nice write – by all means break it down – God Bless – fan/friend – Princess
Mr Ghaz on Jun 2, 2009
Excellent post!!..That was wonderful, beautiful and well presented poem..nice words too..I really liked it..Well done and keep it up..thanks for sharing this wonderful work.
DA Cournean on Jun 2, 2009
Very nice!
Joie Schmidt on Jun 2, 2009
Strong work*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
julianhw on Jun 3, 2009
Clay, ranting is cathartic – well ranted!
lowellpendon on Jun 3, 2009
Good insight
Kate Smedley on Jun 3, 2009
I’ve had a few days like this recently, rant all you like.
Rajiv Sighamony on Jun 8, 2009
short but sweet
eminemgrl123 on Jun 12, 2009
Good write- very like a thought process in its delivery.
S A JOHNSON on Jun 20, 2009
Amen to that!
wonder on Aug 16, 2009
very well expressed

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