Oh! my tears,sweet is your feel
They love me a lot, so I conclude, they’ll never stop.

Tears of mine are so harsh and smooth; they never seem to stop,

Tried so hard to make them stop, but they never seem to stop,

They take me to the past and leave me in the present,

They only know to rewind with no time to carry on,

They are with me when in solace, and

never seem to leave me even in the crowded street,

Don’t know what they need and what ponders them to me,

Cannot break their walls to throw them away from me,

Cannot build them up to give them safety within me,

I was thinking it is cos` of the pain you blurt in me, But

Even when I’m happy about you, they seem to kick out of me.

Am I being fooled or Am I fooling my tears, I seem to wonder at times,

they hear my heart and understand its rhythm, its tryst and truant of our love,

the convulsion of my spirit and mind,

its language and touch they know so well,

the perception of pain with drench of humor from my soul’s eyes,

they walk through me, towards time beneath holding me tight,

Breaks the shackle of my love so true to be dried far away ,

At a place only my tears know, so I conclude 

They love me a lot, its vaccum is the echo my heart hears,

They’ll never stop.

 

 

 

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  • dnarayana18 on Mar 3, 2010

    so cute.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 3, 2010

    Quite touching.

  • giftarist on Mar 3, 2010

    Quite deep. I like this piece. Good work!

  • 8Shei8 on Mar 3, 2010

    So much emotions. Nicely expressed.

  • Stan Wilson on Mar 3, 2010

    very well illustrated here with your beautiful pictures,which in themselves tell the story,and along with you beautiful written words tell the picture…you are very talented…..trying to make them stop,but they are so hard to stop,this so lovely and true,no matter hard you try and wipe tears away more still seem to flow…thank you very much for sharing this with us all here…..tear some…..

  • yes me on Mar 3, 2010

    Emotion of the moment or irritation of the lachrymal gland will have you flowing…. nice poem Hepsi.

  • AlmaG on Mar 3, 2010

    A heartfelt poem :)

  • pen2010 on Mar 3, 2010

    nice one

  • pearl2010 on Mar 3, 2010

    Good one.It’s heart touching.

  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Mar 3, 2010

    that was a really emotional poem written from the heart and soul, so the feelings should be respected. i could relate to this beautiful poem. only those people can shed tears who understand what is true love and this is what distinguises real human beings from stone hearted beings. beautifully composed and 10 out of 10 from me. i loved it all.

  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Mar 3, 2010

    a truly heartfelt poem saturated with pure love and pain too. beautifully compsed and scripted too. i really like this poem.

  • sara2010 on Mar 4, 2010

    deeplly one

  • Ranjan Mathews on Mar 4, 2010

    Tear pearls keep coming
    To Love always homing
    Till Pearl Island keeps growing
    Shed them free and keep glowing!

  • Literatour on Mar 4, 2010

    Nice !!

  • Guy Hogan on Mar 4, 2010

    Sometimes tears are our only solace. As I get older it seems I’m more willing to accept how tearful I feel at times. Maybe that’s wisdom.

  • EK Encarnacion on Mar 4, 2010

    Hepsi, truly a heartfelt poem!

    very touching. i can feel the pain inside. *claps*

  • ISHAN on Mar 5, 2010

    Touching…..well expressed…

  • deep blue on Mar 7, 2010

    Touching poetry.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 7, 2010

    the first poem i ever wrote was

    THE TRUANT

    my school teacher took kit away from me

    i dont have a copy

    alas it was wonderful

    that only now i can see

    ur truant is greater gr888888888 it be
    lhlhlh

  • albert1jemi on Mar 8, 2010

    grt post

  • standingproud on Mar 10, 2010

    Beautiful tear flow full of emotion.

  • ronthoughts on Mar 11, 2010

    Emotional and touching poetry.

  • The Last Ogre on Mar 30, 2010

    A very heart-felt poem.

  • Starpisces on Apr 12, 2010

    don’t cry, don’t cry….
    heehee, a touching piece.

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