The rates have been cut back to the bare minimum.

I need to write but the words just won’t come
I’m too wound up and I know what it’s from
It’s from driving this ole truck and being far from home
I miss my wife and our “kids” I’m so very alone
It used to be a great life out here on the road
We made darn good money and my happiness showed
With each passing mile and each passing day
I gave the Lord thanks for showing us the way
But that’s all gone just a fond memory now
I’m still out here driving but it’s different somehow
It’s no longer fun and I dread every minute
Trucking doesn’t pay anything now
So there’s no future in it
The rates have been cut back to the bare minimum
And it’s hard to make good money even
If you constantly run
The high cost of fuel is the icing on the cake
I just don’t know how much more of this
Nightmare I’ll be able to take
But there aren’t any jobs in our hometown
And I’m told it isn’t much better anywhere else
It’s bad all over because the economy’s down
So until things improve I’ll just wear
A frown and pray for the day
That I’ll be able to go home to stay

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  • IcyCucky on Apr 21, 2008

    Very touching poem, Nick!
    My heart goes out to you and Jan..

  • Joe Poniatowski on Apr 21, 2008

    I sure hope things look up for us in this home town. This is a very descriptive and accurate poem. Nice rhyming, by the way.

  • Josey on Apr 21, 2008

    Powerful stuff. I also thought trucking would be a hard life. I admire how you make it work.

  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 21, 2008

    I hope things get better soon. It is bad all over, and gas prices so high we are all in troublel

  • R.B. Parsley on Apr 21, 2008

    Nick,
    I thought you got lost!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. I really like this. Its got a lot of bounce to it, and You’re experience in trucking shines through. Perhaps one day you can retire that truck and just to your hearts desire. I’ve had many truckers in my family and they all agree its a very lonely low paying job. Hope one day you can stay home with Jan. By the way, Write me!!! Want to hear about your new job!!! Great Poem!!!
    Randy

  • KathySpring on Apr 22, 2008

    You have been in my prays Nick. Up here in alaska, they have been doing several special news reports on the trucking and how its just not working out, As I’m sure you can imagine trucking is pretty important up here in the Majestic Ak. I’ll keep you in my prays. A really nice piece here…flows and as Randy said a lot of bounce. Its nice to read some more of your work finally.
    KathySpring

  • Nick Kenney on Apr 22, 2008

    Thanks everyone and it’s great to be home!

  • Anne Lyken-Garner on Apr 22, 2008

    Nick, I’m sorry to hear that. I know how much you enjoyed driving. With a war on, I daresay it’ll get worse. Even food prices are going up because Diesel is so high. I hope it will all level out soon.

  • Nick Kenney on Apr 22, 2008

    Thank you Anne…and yes, you’re right about it getting worse, it will here because it’s an election year…everyone is scared and waiting to see who’ll be our next president and what they’ll do.

  • johnnie metcalfe on Apr 23, 2008

    you and jan are always in my prayers i do belivethat trucking is a hard with gas the way it is now i dont know what the future hold

  • Lucy Lockett on Apr 24, 2008

    Beautiful words Nick! Sometimes life is hard, I knew a cabbie in Sydney who wrote poetry and had some books printed and sold them to his fares! Maybe you could sell your books somewhere on your route, truckstops or cafes. Just a thought…Love & light to you.

  • Nick Kenney on Apr 24, 2008

    Thank you Johnnie and Lucy! We can always use prayers!
    None of my stories have been published yet Lucy…it’s on my list of “to do” projects. But thanks so much for the idea!
    God’s blessings to you my friend.

  • Dawn S. on Apr 26, 2008

    Great poem, you have always had a way with words. Can’t wait for the election year to be over. I am glad for the warmer weather! That’s the only plus right now. My prayers are with you too. Take Care.

  • Francie on Apr 26, 2008

    Your story is touching and told with much heart and feelings. I too know things get worse before they will hopefully start looking up. I wish all good things for you and your family!

    Take good care!

  • Nick Kenney on Apr 27, 2008

    Thank you so much Dawn and Francie.

  • M.C. Johnson on Apr 30, 2008

    I’m so sorry, big bro. I’m praying for ya.

  • Dee Huff on Apr 30, 2008

    It must be so hard for you. I hope things start to get better soon.

  • Nick Kenney on Apr 30, 2008

    Thank you M.C. and Dee.
    M.C. how’s school, kidlet? :)

  • MysLykeMeeh on May 1, 2008

    Nick, you really have a good heart. Your poem always reflects your good soul. Gentle and longing for the love piece of poetry.

  • Nick Kenney on May 2, 2008

    Thank you MysLykeMeeh! That means an awful lot…

  • P.R. Mace on May 13, 2008

    Nick,

    Good poem. I feel your grief over a good job now bad. I feel the same way about nursing. I have been a nurse for 27 years and all I want to do is quit and write and write and write. My brother was a trucker for many years so I feel I am part of the family. Hang in there man and keep writing. One day we will all make a living from our creative side.

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