I wrote this poem because I myself saw an abusive relationship weather mine or someone else’s you will never know but if our in such a relationship stand firm like a rock and leave because your to good for that person and you deserve alot more.

I’ve seen your true colours,

I’ve seen you for what you are,

I’ve seen all you claim not to be and I’ve seen truely who you are,

When we first came togther my heart leapt towards you,

But now i’ve seen you’re true colours i have no affection for you,

The real you is so biter,The real you broke my heart,

The real you plays harmful games,The real you hides in the dak,

But now i’ve seen your true colours,

The monsters come out of the dark,

Now i’ve seen your true colours but from the world you hide the person you really are…

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  • raman13 on Oct 1, 2009

    Great Work

    Keep The good work on

    Best Regards

  • ken bultman on Oct 1, 2009

    The “real you” never changes.

  • Darla Cooke on Oct 1, 2009

    I can really relate to this poem.

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 1, 2009

    You expressed your feelings so well. Good work.

    Christine

  • agriculi on Oct 1, 2009

    A beautiful poem. Do you mind if I put a link to it in my blog?

  • agriculi on Oct 1, 2009

    That\’s done, you can find the link here. And now I will boost it for you.

    http://mybookx.wordpress.com/2009/10/01/true-colors/

  • Cebah on Oct 1, 2009

    Liked !

  • Joie Schmidt on Oct 1, 2009

    Strong work – - a heart is a very resilient thing – - “whatever doesn’t kill you makes you stronger.”

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • stryka66 on Oct 2, 2009

    Nice work – whatever ‘mask’ is worn the truth will ‘out’ eventually

  • royee100 on Oct 2, 2009

    Nice work

  • emmahaynes on Oct 3, 2009

    So so very true :)

  • Chicks on Oct 27, 2009

    Nice one…

  • redmail99 on Nov 11, 2009

    i like it….

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