About love.

Flirtatious glances
We take our chances
Jump into love full speed
Giddy first kisses
I’ll be your “misses”
Give me the golden ring!
Hand in hand we’ll go
Through life’s ebb and flow
We’ll face it together
True I’ll always be
My lover you’ll see
Faithful to only you

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  • Glynis Smy on Jan 11, 2009

    I enjoyed this, thanks

  • payge on Jan 11, 2009

    A very nice piece about love..I liked it.

  • Bren Parks on Jan 11, 2009

    So much emotion so few lines…well done…

  • Mercedes Selvira on Jan 11, 2009

    Nice one. I like the simple, sweet, direct style.

  • trishia on Jan 12, 2009

    I agree,this is so short,sweet and powerful!

  • K Kristie on Jan 13, 2009

    This made me giggle…and smile…I agree with Trishia, this is short and sweet and powerful…funny…it made me misty eyed…

  • goodselfme on Jan 16, 2009

    this glides along so well from start to great finish.

  • Lizzie Green on Jan 20, 2009

    Simple and beautiful, great work!x

  • Majic on Jan 23, 2009

    Clear as the lightening! I love it!

  • AmskyDC on Jan 25, 2009

    You’re one of the Juliets of modern era. like it!

  • Adam Henry Sears on Jan 28, 2009

    Hi, Lisa, how are you?
    Very nice short piece about love’s promise.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Feb 10, 2009

    Great poem!

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 13, 2009

    This is a great poem, made me smile

  • simplyoj on Aug 19, 2009

    Every word speaks about love. :-D

  • swatilohani on Feb 24, 2010

    words of wisdom

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