Sometimes we inadvertently hurt those who love us the most.

She awakes from a sound
Her tired eyes burning
She looks around
After hours of yearning
Half fearful half hopeful
Awakened again
Would this be an intruder
Or would it be him?
She feels her face burning
Her own angry words
Came flooding back
How many times
Had she made her attack?
He worked so many hours
And was never at home
She was so tired
Of being left all alone
Her mind tended to wander
She’d been hurt once before
When she’d left her ex
She was hurt to the core
To trust again
Was no easy task
But if she couldn’t
How would they last?
Her husband needed her trust
Not angry words
From tears in her eyes
Her vision had blurred
She shook her head
Was she seeing right?
Had her beloved returned
In the blackness of night?
She opened her arms
To hold unto him tight
And promised herself
She’d make everything right
She knew God heard prayers
When she saw he’d returned
True love is given
And not always earned.

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  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 23, 2009

    A beautifully written and heartfelt poem. Well done.

    Christine

  • Dee Huff on Aug 23, 2009

    That’s so touching.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Aug 23, 2009

    This is indeed a VERY TOUCHING poem. Well done again, sister! Have my liked it! :-)

  • BC Doan on Aug 23, 2009

    Beautiful, Judy! The description is just perfect..

  • Judy Sheldon on Aug 23, 2009

    Christine, Dee, Chan, & Icy, thank you so much for your support.
    It is truly appreciated.

    God bless & take care!

  • Mr Ghaz on Aug 23, 2009

    Excellent!..this was lovely and well presented poem.I loved it..Thanks a lot for sharing this great piece..well done!

  • Judy Sheldon on Aug 23, 2009

    Mr.Ghaz, thank you so much for the kind words.

    Take care & God bless.

  • Jenny Heart on Aug 23, 2009

    Spoken with a heartfelt spirited soul. Very good.

  • valli on Aug 23, 2009

    Beautiful poem.

  • Melody SJAL on Aug 23, 2009

    Lovely piece.

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Aug 23, 2009

    Well said.

  • Lex92 on Aug 25, 2009

    Absolutely beautiful Judy :) Very touching

  • ET Barton on Aug 25, 2009

    This beautiful. Very interesting.

  • Judy Sheldon on Aug 25, 2009

    Thanks so much everyone for your support. It is truly appreciated.

    Take care & God bless!

  • quiet voice on Sep 1, 2009

    ….Hi Judy, what a great writing, so honest and open. Thank you
    for sharing your gift. Take care.

  • Goodselfme on Sep 1, 2009

    Your words express the feelings so well. Great poem

  • Ruby Hawk on Sep 1, 2009

    Judy, Your poem tells a beautiful story and you are right, love isn’t always earned.

  • Ruby Hawk on Sep 1, 2009

    Judy, Your poem tells a beautiful story and you are right, love isn\\\’t always earned.

  • CA Johnson on Sep 7, 2009

    Your poem was just beautiful Judy! I was able to picture the couple reuniting in my mind as I was reading your poem. It was such a romantic poem!

  • Judy Sheldon on Sep 7, 2009

    CA, thanks so much for your kind comments.

  • Sourav on Sep 9, 2009

    Very touching and sensitive. Beautiful write.

  • Judy Sheldon on Sep 9, 2009

    Sourav, thanks for your support! God bless!

  • Teves on Oct 15, 2009

    Love is blind! Love hurts…

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