A ride down I-Seventy-Five in our trusty old red Mitsubishi. Traffic is heavy with trucks, RVs, state patrol cars and we just cruise along.

Driving down I-Seventy-five
Vehicles go on mile after after mile
Big rigs have taken over the road
Pedal to the metal ten in a row
RVs come in second place
Cars jockey for a little space
State Patrols go by in a flash
Speeding to the scene of
The latest crash

While we in our
Trusty old red Mitsubishi throw
Them a cherry and cruise at sixty

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  • Michelle on Sep 27, 2007

    Hey, I like it.

  • Nick Kenney on Sep 27, 2007

    HA! So true! Isn’t it something how everyone is in such a big hurry to go nowhere? I like this one…

  • Amos on Sep 27, 2007

    What a word picture.It’s perfect.

  • Tracy J on Sep 30, 2007

    That is a perfect word picture, I can see you guys going down the highway blowing cheeries.

  • Trou on Oct 7, 2007

    thats cute, It made me giggle.

  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 15, 2008

    I am so late thanking you all for your comments. I haven’t been to this page, I guess, since I put it online. thanks again guys

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