Truth

Yalonda on Mar 4, 2010

Tags: all, away, back, distance, fall, gain, gap, look, lose, me, poem, Poetry, saved, stand, support, true, truth, turn, US, you

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A poem.

You look at me
I look at you
You turn away
But I stand true

There is a gap
The distance grows
How far will it widen
Nobody knows

How could you turn
Your back to us all
Without support
We all will fall

Nothing to gain
But so much to lose
It all could be saved
If you just told the truth.

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Comments (12)

dusanoo on Mar 4, 2010
Really good one!
Jenilia12 on Mar 4, 2010
Good post.
Thanks to share this one.
Precious Illusions on Mar 5, 2010
A very beautiful message you conveyed Yalonda.If we just speak the truth, then we’ll be spared of many complications and misunderstandings.
debasishetc on Mar 5, 2010
nice poet
T. S. Lewis on Mar 5, 2010
I hope it worked out in the end. A very heartfelt poem.
Diamond Channing on Mar 5, 2010
Very nice writing style – A++!!
Anita Treso on Mar 7, 2010
Thank you for sharing – Nice imagery.
sambhafusia on Mar 7, 2010
great share..thanks for that
JamesHogan on Mar 9, 2010
Great lyrics friend…
And thanks for the feed back on my article talking about Auto-Tunes benefits for new musicians…

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albert1jemi on Mar 9, 2010
beautiful post
maranatha on Apr 1, 2010
sad and touching, tells the story well.
Domenico Cigliano on Jun 19, 2010
nice plea, concise and very well written

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