Cheaters never win: a poem of grave consequences.

The old man was dying–losing his life.
There at his bedside sat his loving wife.
They’d travelled a long road that has come to an end
And upon each other they had come to depend.

He’d sleep for awhile then wake with a smile.
She’d pat his brow; hold his hand for awhile.
His breathing was labored as he tried to speak.
He tried to sit up but he was too weak.

“There’s something that I have to tell you, my dear.
I cheated on you for more than a year.
Yes, I had a fling with Mrs. O’Roarke.”
“Hush,” she said, “Relax.  Let the arsenic work.”

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  • ladybaby on Jun 10, 2009

    I guess it was no secret after all. lol

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 10, 2009

    LOL, I love it. The ending couldn’t be better.

  • Sheila M on Jun 10, 2009

    haha arsenic and old lace ~ that’s horrible……..nice write Ken=)

  • Ramalingam on Jun 10, 2009

    The secret of a dying man unraveled at last.Thanks

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Jun 10, 2009

    Oh, dear. That was priceless!

  • Deep Blue on Jun 10, 2009

    Well it pays to be honest before final judgment comes. Cool poem.

  • goodselfme on Jun 10, 2009

    The flow was good and the surprise got me. Well done, my friend.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jun 11, 2009

    Ha ha ha! That was hilarious and so unexpected. My hubby wants to know what I am laughing so loudly at.

    Christine

  • kate smedley on Jun 11, 2009

    Great ending and nicely written poem too.

  • Darla Cooke on Jun 11, 2009

    I wasn’t expecting the ending.

  • Tanya Wallace on Jun 13, 2009

    As usual completely intrigued and then laughing.I felt sad until the end.Excellent work ken.I really liked this poem.*smiling*

  • Sky Lumina on Jun 15, 2009

    hahahhaa, this is great!! ive heard it in the form of a regular joke before, but to put it into a poem (or was it ur idea altogether?) is simply genious!

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