Entwined with sorrow.

In the lush garden
By the lily pond
Flickering twin flames
Become one
Wrought with grief
Quivering unsteadily
Underneath a silk leaf
Of a world illusionary
Hiding from the storm
Locked in an embrace
Clinging to each others form
In this divine place
Of life transformed


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  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 19, 2009

    That is so beautiful. You have a wonderful way with words.

    Christine

  • giftarist on Aug 19, 2009

    Beautifully written..I like it

  • papaleng on Aug 19, 2009

    lovely, moving and nice choice of words

  • ken bultman on Aug 19, 2009

    Great imagery.

  • Lostash on Aug 19, 2009

    Beautiful once again Lady! You have a great way with language!

  • kathie107 on Aug 19, 2009

    I liked it, so nice, well done!

  • Collette Edwards on Aug 19, 2009

    great job your words paint wonderful pitures and I LOVE the flam picture as well :D

  • Shirley Shuler on Aug 19, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, heartfelt and absolutely beautiful!!

  • Melody SJAL on Aug 20, 2009

    Very hot and passionate.

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