My daughter fills our home with tiny activities.

Twinkle twinkle little star

My four year daughter rules the roost

She practises a ball dance with father

Always out on a cycling tryst

Her grandmother spoils her to the hilt

She considers eating a chore

Cleverly manipulates television remote

Asks me to take leave everyday

Loves wearing little bangles and bracelets

Twinkle twinkle little star

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  • lowellpendon on Jun 5, 2009

    these are precious little tiny activity from a child that we parents shouldn’t miss. time flies and that child in us slowly ignored and suppressed as we grew. i miss those twinkle little star moments as my son no longer a child. but until now i still keep that child in me alive to help me appreciate time and precious moments that only a child can see and experience – beauty and happiness.

  • goodselfme on Jun 5, 2009

    A true treasure for all grand parents and parents alike to get to truly enjoy the youngsters with all their antics.

  • George W Whitehead on Jun 5, 2009

    Beautiful!

  • Swayam Siddha on Jun 5, 2009

    great poem. nice read!

  • Christine Ramsay on Jun 5, 2009

    That is such a lovely poem, making me feel sorry that my little grandson lives so far away and we can’t share in these little things.

    Christine

  • clay hurtubise on Jun 5, 2009

    Cute! Capture those moments in prose and pictures!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Darla Cooke on Jun 5, 2009

    This is a cute and adorable poem! I love it!

  • Joe Dorish on Jun 5, 2009

    Sounds like a bundle of joy!

  • Betty Carew on Jun 5, 2009

    What a wonderful poem. The moments are very special.

  • kate smedley on Jun 5, 2009

    That’s so sweet, thanks for sharing!

  • PR Mace on Jun 5, 2009

    Sounds like you love your little star.

  • Atanacio on Jun 5, 2009

    I never get tired of reading your stuff :)

  • ken bultman on Jun 6, 2009

    Dandy little poem about your little one.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jun 8, 2009

    Stars are precious and I like to sing twinkle twinkle little star too…it brought me back to a childhood…

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Jun 8, 2009

    Your little star, is surely shinning, always take the time to watch her shine, the time passes much to fast

  • DriftingInsomnia on Jun 8, 2009

    awww ^^

  • Lisa Clayton Williams on Jun 13, 2009

    Cute! Sounds like my two little girls!! :-)

  • Wylrhyss Terrado RN on Jun 16, 2009

    It is so lovely…

  • hiho on Jun 20, 2009

    She’s lucky to have such a wonderful mum like you Swatilohani.

  • stumbleuponwriter on Jun 23, 2009

    You are a cool mom..

  • monica55 on Jul 4, 2009

    A busy little one, but that is how they are at 4 years old. Great mom and great write.
    Monica.

  • Rookie Expert on Jul 11, 2009

    Aint the little ones in the house always the Star! Always upto something adorable. The \”i like it\” is for the 4 yr old.

  • yes me on Mar 8, 2010

    Kids a great loved your post.
    cheers

  • 8Shei8 on Mar 10, 2010

    This is just precious!

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