Good poem. Sounds delicious! Holly, if you want you can go into my profile/portfolio and check out my work. Only if you want to.

Mmmmm, now I want some!! I can taste it

This would make a great advertisement in the summer time nice work… I will stumble this for you.. I think it could do well
Sure we’ll see… nice work

If there are typos here, it’s because I’ve got sand and ice cream all over the keyboard. Thanks foer the comeback in “A-Z”. I really enjoy your work; it touches multiple senses.

mouth-watering.. I`m practically drooling here..

colors and texture and vivid imagery, tastes; it’s nearly sensory overload. love it

Okay, I want some.

You have an incredibly interesting way of using language and metaphor.

kewl!

Very Nice!!

more than the icecreme

its the kiss

thats the one,

that makes one scream

very good holly
flows well, good rhythm and story
I like it a lot – revivor

Thanks for that, it’s almost as if I just had some.

Got to go to the freezer now, to see if we have anything that sensual inside

I scream for ice cream
Until my throat is sore
Daddy says you shouldn’t scream
Mama’s at the store
When she gets back you’ll get the stuff
That you’re screaming for

mmm, delicious words:)

Twister! I loved them … cool poem (excuse the pun)

Wonderful write! I love the imagery in this. Think I better go to the food store for some ice cream!

Joyous.

Lovely for a hot summer day. Great poem. Reminds me of when I was a kid. Sweet memories never fade.

delicious poem…could eat it

liked it a lot innocence and yet very steamy sexual inuendo underlying. Great!

…well i like ice-creams…

Painted so lovely!