What a beautiful piece. It is just lovely….

nice poem,thanks for sharing

Short but powerful thanks for sharing

What you say about English writers not having to follow the haiku form strictly because of the differences in Japanese and English makes good sense. Thanks.

I am grateful to my dear Friends for their kind comments. This is the Grace of God that such talented authors from several countries and especially USA that is so distant from my country spare some of their precious time to read my posts. This overwhelms with emotion.
Wrath Warbone is very wise and learned as he aptly says that we need not follow 5-7-5 structure rigidly. My two haiku collections are published without blind adherence to 17 syllables, and the Japanese ‘kigo’.
What matters is to create a “haiku moment’. In my two published critical books about the haiku of Japanese poets Sayumi Kamakura and Ban’ya Natsuishi, I have tried to make this point clear. Best wishes

You have captured a sublime moment.

Haiku is a form of poetry that I wish I could write, but I’m afraid I’m better on article writing and fiction. thanks for sharing.

I find your Haiku, inspiring. Glad to see that there are other forms of Haiku, The Japanese way is hard to make an impact with such short verses. I would like to know more about this form, and perhaps try it. Thank you, I’d like to learn. Will you do an article on this subject. I’d like to read it.

Wow, I am learning to understand haiku better and I think you are a great haiku writer. I could sense the deep sensation with just a few phrases. It’s like something I could feel with my heart and brain, but not really something that I could explain. It feels so unique! Thanks a lot, my friend! Keep writing!

Wonderful…

Very profound work,Peace Poet!

It’s a lovely piece. I didn’t know you could do haiku without the 5-7-5 rule.

Japanese Haiku is more focus on Nature, good one though the second one (the last one) is only 4 syllables.

very difficult for me to understand the concept.

Very nice.

Nicely done.

simply beautiful….

I don’t know much about Haiku, wonderfully written,,

I wish I could write haikus as well as this one. Thanks for sharing.